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这题英语修改病句该怎么该呢?

  In the after, I go to cram school, about 2 hours later, I returned home, then I with my mother go out to swim, I came home after dinner, and then I started to do the homework.
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提问者: 901754013  来自:福建   时间:2013-08-09 15:31     悬赏:0    
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  In the after(afternoon), I go(went) to cram school,(.) about(About) 2 hours later, I returned home,(.)then(Then) I with my mother go(went) out to swim,(.) I came home after dinner, and then I started to do the(删掉) homework.
  
  括号里的是修改后的内容。
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时间:08-09 16:31
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